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No One Knows How Fathers Are Made...

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Mama always says when we look really hard
We'll find what we've lost

She says he is never very far away
He often heads off to work
Mama says working is much
Better than being in bad company
Not true?

(...)


Come on, tell us who does?
Everyone knows
How babies are made
But no one knows
How fathers are made
Mister Know-it-All,
It's in our blood, that's it.

Should I suck this out of my thumb or what?
Tell me where I can find the answer.
It must be at least a thousand times that
I've sucked my fingers dry.
Hey!

Where are you? Papa, where are you?
Where are you? Papa, where are you?
Where are you? Papa, where are you?
Where are you, where are you, Papa, where are you?


- Translation of "Papaoutai" by Stromae (found on lyricstranslate.com/en/papaout…

Wheeeee. One of my "fast" works again.^^ This is Breezepaw with his father Crowfeather. This scene's from the book "Eclipse", where they travel back home and say goodbye to Brook and Stormfur. The apprentices head off to catch some prey as a goodbye-present and when they return Crowfeather compliments Lionpaw on his pigeon, instead of complimenting his own son.

At this moment I felt really sorry for Breezepaw. :/ I never really liked him, or Crowfeather or Jayfeather, because they're all grumpy. Must be a family-thing... However, Crowfeather clearly shows, that he doesn't give a single damn about Breezepaw. No wonder that Breezepaw  acted a little strange and always got in trouble. He just wanted to be acknowledged by his father. But Crowfeather was always like "Meh..... -_-' Go away. Shut up. Stop existing please, you're embarrassing me..."

There were so many scenes in which I just wanted to throw something at Crowfeather for being a jerk again and give Breezepaw a hug. :( I didn't read The Last Hope, yet, but as far as I know Crow even apologized for Breezepelt's behaviour towards Leafpool and her kits, saying that he doesn't know why, but Breezepelt had always been this way. Whaaaat Crow, whaaaaaaaat... Staaahp. D: I know why Breepelt wanted his half-siblings dead at some point. Because his father NEVER LOVED HIM MAYBE?!!! -.-' There's just no possibility to grow up healthyly, when your father acts like a total jerk towards you and you always have to fear, that he'll leave you because you're not good enough :(


So...uh... Sorry about the rant, but I just hated how Crowfeather treated his own son like dirt. I thought the song would fit Breezepaw/pelt quite well. Since I'm not that good at French, I decided to use a translation ^^

Oh and by the way... I know Breezepaw is supposed to be sleek-furred, but I like the idea of him bein a little fuzzy ♥ :3

Hope you like it~ Next upload will be another comic page.


Story and Characters (c) by Erin Hunter

Illustration (c) by :iconmizu-no-akira: ...ME! :3

Image size
3264x2448px 468.68 KB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
FE320,X835,C540
Shutter Speed
10/1250 second
Aperture
F/3.1
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
160
Date Taken
Oct 23, 2013, 2:42:06 PM
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FangtheSandwing's avatar

Jee I know how Breezepelt feels 😞